Blog #5

It is hard for me to imagine what this piece would look like as a radio show because I have never done anything with radio and I don't listen to it either. But I would imgagine it could not be this long? If that's right, then you would have to take out any inofmation that is not necessary to keep the story going. However, I would keep everything about the story the same. I loved the story and I think a lot of people would listen to this if it was a radio show. I think it might be easier to change the characters names into names that are more simple so it's easier to follow. This story might also be a little too discriptive to have read on the radio. Some viewers might be easily confused or lost when hearing so much information at once. I would make it a little bit more funny to keep the viewers interested. I did not like the ending of this story, I wanted it all to work out and everyone to be happy!